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'Lo Sabine. I'm afraid I've been back, numerous times with the title catching my eye, and yet have never read through...or responded. To be honest, smaur's novel-length lecture and your ...

My first thought, sans consciousness was: the resignation of a saint. I don't know that that's anything at all. I enjoyed it, as it made me think; I enjoyed it ...

Hullo Myth. ^_^ Yes, I'm still very fond of Harpies . Quite a bit of this seems to suffer from a certain passivity, though, in verb-tense and sentence structure. I ...

Hello Tri - I thought while I had a split-second, I could read something this brief and respond. ^_^ From the start - you have a beginning sentence that intrigues. ...

Well, I think its more each to his own. Also, it's a bit harsh to exlude people without money problems (not that I don't have money problems). Ah, I do ...

yeah well, what can i say, stuck up people who think the idea of fun is to be as boring and serious at all times dont really excite me. sorry, ...

Sans questions of theology, serious philosophy or history - this was very amusing. ^_^ I think, with more precision, you might make it side-splitting. Any more allusions to the differences ...

Hullo Tri. As its Fools' Duel, I've got to get to it. ^_^ No in-depth critique here - I enjoyed it, though its commonplace suroundings through me off briefly. (In ...

Lovely sketch, Myth - as brief but as vivid as a mirror's reflection. ^_~ I can tell you, only one sentence in the entire bit stuck out for lack of ...

I have to say I'm rather fond of the beginning there, in its fragment. 'Your hands the most' - it brought my imagining to a point, directly; and by what ...

Ach... Forgive me the drawn-out delay on getting to this, Rose. I hope it's not irrelevant at this point. !_! She adorns her face with color and design because that’s ...

When the giants came to steal her soul away, she went without a fight. Haiku's generally a sort of poem too short to critique. Certainly there's no need of a ...

Hey Smaur. I've read this, ah well - more than once. I thought at last I ought to say something. What caught my attention most - and in the most ...

Hullo Jig. ^_^ Being a Duel entry, naturally, I'll have to get to a relatively useful critique at some point. At the moment, brevity. I enjoyed the atmosphere; and the ...

I hope I'm not trespassing impertinently on story-territory left to the edge or buried. But Myth, this is lovely. Your fantasy is tangibly real and commonplace, intermingled with the ordinary ...